The manufacturing component, which could employ more than 370 people, has been called “the biggest prize” in terms of job creation.Who said that?
Here's what a community college website says about this technique of "reporting" something having been said or done by someone without saying who said or did it.
We find an overabundance of the passive voice in sentences created by self-protective business interests, magniloquent educators, and bombastic military writers (who must get weary of this accusation), who use the passive voice to avoid responsibility for actions taken.If the News & Record is pinning its future to customers paying for its content, management would be wise to advise their reporters and editors that empty-headed cheerleader puff pieces like this are not of any value. They are insulting, frankly, to anyone with half a brain.
I've met very few Journalist who are all that interesting to read. There are some, but the format of reporting, conciseness, is something that doesn't lend itself to paying a subscription for, IMHO.
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